Hi guys,
Just wondering if anyone is willing to read my UC Essay 1 (dreams/aspirations). I’ve already got some really useful feedback from a few guys from CC who have read my other essays, but they’ve already done enough so I don’t want to bother them.
(P/S - This is probably my worst essay so far, so just wanted to know if I’m on the right track etc. Also since I’m in the military I don’t really have an advisor/college counselor.)
Thanks,
IntlApplicant