Anyone willing to read my UC personal statement?

College Essays
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<p>The prompt is the second one, about a personal quality, talent, etc. I've heard good feedback about this from peers and a teacher, but I'd like to know if I clearly answered the prompt and it's what UCs are looking for.
It's also a bit long, so advice on cuts would be very helpful.</p>

<p>I'll PM you if you would like to help. Thanks a bunch!!</p>

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<p>I can read it if you like!</p>

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<p>Bumpppppppp</p>

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<p>Bump bump bump</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read.</p>

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<p>Bumpppppppp</p>

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<p>wanna read it!</p>

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<p>Wanna read it too!!</p>

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<p>I will read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! :)</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ve messaged it to some of you, anyone else willing to help? :D</p>

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<p>Ill read it, PM me</p>

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<p>Sure. I’ll give it a go. :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it too!!! :)</p>

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<p>bump…? :))</p>

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<p>meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee</p>

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<p>Pm awayyyy</p>

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<p>i like to read and reply. thanks</p>