<p>Hey fellas, i finally finished my Upenn essay and i was wondering if anyone was willing to criticize it. I would prefer Upenn students since they know what it takes to get in, but anyone is welcome. </p>
<p>Thanks in advance :)</p>
<p>I can take a look.
I’ve already applied</p>
<p>I’ll read it, which college did you apply to?</p>
<p>college of arts and science</p>
<p>I like manutd, but I can also read it too. I sent mine in already.</p>
<p>haha i’ve hated them with a passion all my life. but thanks for agreeing to read it.</p>
<p>I can read it too :)</p>
<p>I’ll read, PM!</p>
<p>ill read it too if you’d like</p>
<p>I as well. I hate Manutd too, and I don’t even watch football.</p>