Anyone willing to read my why columbia short answer?

<p>I had a pretty decent answer, that is until I had to fit it into the space provided. Very frustrating! Anyways I tried to fit in what I wanted to say, can anyone critique it and let me know what I could do to make it better. Also if I should specify some aspects. THanx</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>sure, pm me.</p>

<p>I'll read it too.</p>

<p>ill read!.........</p>

<p>hi pm me, i'll read</p>

<p>hey ill read it</p>

<p>i'll read it, pm me</p>

<p>will gladly read it :]</p>

<p>i'll read it if you'd pm me</p>

<p>sure if u still need some1</p>

<p>ya, i'll take a look</p>

<p>pm me please</p>

<p>sure pm me</p>

<p>pm me plz:)</p>

<p>I shall read it.</p>

<p>sure thing :p</p>

<p>Sure, I'll look.</p>

<p>I WILL! :)
if u see this in time~</p>