Anyone willing to review an unconventional Princeton essay. Am worried about risk!!

College Essays
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<p>send it over
i already gave in my princeton app</p>

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<p>Thanks everyone.
bump :)</p>

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<p>Send it if you still need some critique.</p>

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<p>I'm applying to Princeton, but I've turned my essays in. PM me if you want some feedback</p>

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<p>i'm not applying to princeton so just go ahead and PM it over</p>

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<p>thanks guys :) I just sent it out again.
BUMP!</p>

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<p>do you still need help?</p>