anyone would like to critique my essay?

College Essays
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<p>ED deadline is coming~~~~~
does anyone like to help me?</p>

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<p>send it over!</p>

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<p>sure! I've done a lot of edits so far...I'm '09 if you don't mind</p>

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<p>Sure, if you PM it.</p>

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<p>email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I'd like to critique it. PM it over !</p>

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<p>i'll critique
pm me</p>

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<p>I'll take a look and give you ratings.</p>