Hey all-
I was waitlisted and because UW is my dream school and top pick, I have written an appeal but would like some input or advice if possible! I know it is not the best, and my writing is very confusing and I have quite a few run-ons often, but I find it difficult to revise and replace. I find it hard to look at my writing with fresh eyes and decide on how to change/fix my issues. Thank you in advance!!!
GPA: 3.6
ACT: 31
SAT: 1390
Accepted into Husky Marching Band recently.
Extracurriculars: Marching Band Section Leader, Jazz Band, COPE (Swedish Hospital Volunteer), Altar Service @ Church, Mission Trip
My name is x and I am currently a senior at x High School, waitlisted for the autumn quarter of 2018. In spite of the fact that I have full faith in the Admissions Office’s decision-making processes, I feel deeply obligated to reach out and request a reconsideration of my qualifications and my possible prospective role at the University of Washington.
Although I was heavy-hearted with the waitlist notification, I remained optimistic. I made contact with Director McDavid, expressing my wholehearted interest in the Husky Marching Band. I was offered an audition and later informed of my position in the alto saxophone section! Simply by practicing the marching band anthems and fight songs, I feel a stronger sense of pride and attachment to the University of Washington than I have for my high school.
For many years, I dreamt of being a part of the Seattle campus that is so enriched by many like-minded students and faculty who are dedicated to community growth and unity. Although I spent hours touring and exploring many other universities that catered to my interests, it became clear to me that the University of Washington was the only school capable of bringing out my full potential. The endless support and warmth that exudes from both the staff and students, coupled with the innumerable opportunities offered in all departments, quickly ranked University of Washington as my top pick by far. However, growing up in the circumstances I have faced and experiencing the setbacks that have challenged my academic performance, I believe that what I have lacked during my high school career can be made up for, as I have matured and grown from the past.
At the young age of seven years old, I was forced to say goodbye to my older half-sister, who was my best friend and carer. Due to instability and emotional turmoil in my family, estrangements with family members were common and occurred often. With a limited understanding of the situations at hand, I struggled to adjust to the frequent loss of familiarity. By the time I was a freshman in high school, my half-sister was a mere stranger to me, not having been able to speak to her in years. Arguments and verbal attacks kept the house all but silent, and my concentration with studying proved to become more difficult the more I stayed home. I already grappled with my classes and grades due to the distractions from my family, but as soon as finances presented itself as another problem within my household, I took it upon myself to work a part time job and partake in paying bills in order to ease tensions. The massive responsibility of work and school took a toll on my GPA, although I slowly began to adjust myself and learn to balance my priorities. Now, I can look back on all of these hardships and highlight the resilience I have gained and the skills I have learned to aid me in the future on my journey beyond high school. Being away from home and having a better sense of prioritization will allow me to succeed at UW. I have fallen deeply in love with the study of life, therefore sparking an exciting and genuine interest in school. Despite the fact that many of my senior class peers have been coasting with schoolwork during the second semester, I still strive to raise my grades so that I do not lose sight of my number one goal of enrolling into my dream school.
In my strongest belief, the University of Washington is where I belong, and I am completely dedicated to striving for excellence as a community member and as a student of such a prestigious and boundless institution. I will be fully committed to achieving my dreams and performing to the best of my abilities as a Husky, as I cannot see myself anywhere else but at the heart of Seattle on University of Washington campus.