<p>So, here is the letter I wrote to U. Michigan, since I would have to end up paying 52k $ or 48k $ if I chose U. Illinois. I read that if you are accepted to other schools, you can use it to your advantage by asking them to close the "costs-gap". Is this letter ok?:</p>
<p>To whom it may concern,</p>
<p>I appreciate the acceptance decision I received for the University of Michigan, but I am still undecided about which school to attend.
Unfortunately, our family income has been affected by the dramatic financial crisis in Europe, particularly in Spain.</p>
<p>I have received acceptance decisions from six other schools and I am still not sure on which one to attend. I am looking for the best academics-cost relation and the financial aid is definitely a crucial aspect which will affect my final decision. The schools to which I have been accepted for their respective Computer Science departments are:
-The University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
-Ohio State University
-The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
- The University of Massachusetts at Amherst
- The University of Maryland at College Park
The University of Massachusetts has awarded me with a Chancellors Scholarship of 8500$ per academic year, renewable up to four years. With these financial issues in Spain, my family hugely appreciates this award.
Although my financial situation is challenging at the moment, there is no doubt in my mind that I will succeed in college. I will commit myself to achieve a high GPA during my studies at whatever university I chose to attend.</p>
<p>Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to explain my financial circumstances. I look forward to hearing about your decision.</p>
<p>Sincerely,</p>
<p>NAME</p>