Appeal Letter for College, proofread or help?

<p>I have written an appeal letter for college..</p>

<p>I was placed on one semester of suspension, however,</p>

<p>it was due to my FIRST violation of alcohol, along with other minor charges.</p>

<p>I was wondering if someone would be able to read over my letter, and possibly give me tips?</p>

<p>I could email it or send it to you...this would be greatly appreciated..</p>

<p>Thanks guys!</p>