<p>Hi everyone,
I decided that I am going to write an appeal to my number one choice.
I'm not sure how to write these types of letters or what to say without
sounding like I'm begging. So this is an extreme rough copy and I was hoping
if anyone would like to read it and give me some feedback I would send it to them.
Thanks for all your help!</p>
<p>send it over!</p>
<p>Thanks! I will send it now!</p>