<p>What A Great Day!</p>
<p>i have already filled out most of the application. i currently have a working version of my essay. i was wondering if anyone would be willing to read and critique my essay. i have had some people that i know read it, but i am afraid that they are unable to be completely objective in their evaluation. i am looking for an unbiased critic. any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>Just don't let anyone change it at all besides basic spelling/grammer stuff. The essay should be about you and what you have to say. I personally didn't let another soul read it before I sent it off, because it came from the heart and I really didn't care what anyone else had to say about it.</p>
<p>i would not let anybody change anything major about the essay. i was merely hoping for some construcive criticism.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it if you want. <a href="mailto:Adamus7@gmail.com">Adamus7@gmail.com</a></p>