Applying to Amherst: Any accepted students care to take a look at my essay?

<p>I just created my account here. I wrote my first supplement essay draft yesterday - I wrote my Amherst Supplement. I was wondering if any accepted/alumni students cared to give me any feed back, whether it be steering me in the right direction or letting me know that my draft is on the right track.</p>

<p>If you PM it to me, tomorrow I will try to look it over and give you some feedback! I’m a recently accepted student.</p>

<p>Thank you, I just sent it. Multiple feedback would be extremely welcome, so if anyone else would mind, that would be amazing.</p>

<p><a href=“https://www.amherst.edu/aboutamherst/magazine/issues/2008fall/essays[/url]”>https://www.amherst.edu/aboutamherst/magazine/issues/2008fall/essays&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>You, and other prospective students, will find this helpful.</p>

<p>I’ll be a sophomore this year. You could send it to me.</p>