Applying to HYP need help on a "travel" essay!

College Essays
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<p>Like all "travel" essays I am trying to avoid the cliche ending of how spending my summer in poverty changed my outlook on life. I tried hard to accomplish a unique "feel" but the essay still needs work. I am applying to HYP and some other highly ranked schools, let me know what you think! Thanks!</p>

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<p>u can pm it to me</p>

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<p>thx! bump bump</p>

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<p>bump!ddddddddddd</p>

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<p>…</p>

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<p>bump…</p>

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<p>bump10char…</p>

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<p>i would be happy to read it if you would like to send a pm</p>

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<p>thx! any other readers?</p>

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<p>sure pm me too</p>

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<p>I’ll read tonight..
I will warn you though, I am quite harsh.</p>

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<p>sure pm me.</p>

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<p>If you haven’t sent it yet, feel free to send it to me.</p>

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<p>you can PM it to me too</p>

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<p>relax and pm me, i’ll check</p>