Applying to Wash U- Need help!

<p>Can anyone edit/ critique my personal essay?:)
Also, my essay is 565 words, and I want to reduce it near 500.</p>

<p>I will PM you if you leave a comment!</p>

<p>Pm it</p>

<p>10 char</p>

<p>I hate adding “10char” to my posts. PM it :)</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to read it! PM me :-)</p>

<p>I can read it (:</p>