April 1st Transfer Essay// Help please?

<p>Hey all,</p>

<p>I am currently working on an essay to transfer. Its due April 1 and thought one more pair of eyes wouldn't hurt before I make final revisions. If you will be willing to take a moment, to help me with my essay, I will greatly appreciate it.</p>

<p>Thanks for your time and consideration.</p>

<p>-CallMeSir </p>

<p>I can pm and or email you the prompt (includes school name) and essay.</p>

<p>Sure, send it on over. :)</p>

<p>Did you get the message I’m pretty sure I sent it but I checked my sent box and its empty. I will send it over again.</p>

<p>I’ll look over it too, if you want. PM me.</p>

<p>Thanks! I have a 270 word and an 800 word which would you prefer?</p>