<p>Well, last year I had to write practice college application essays for English class. My teacher really liked both of the ones I wrote and had them read in class. Everyone seemed to like them.</p>
<p>Fast-forward to now and I can't come up with a decent essay that reveals some insight about myself. I feel as if the two essays I wrote don't really reveal anything about me and are trying to be humorous too much. At the same time, my English teacher's positive remarks about them has me conflicted.</p>
<p>Is anyone willing to read it and offer if I should dump them or not? FYI they are very rough drafts, and I have a few sections that I would edit and delete if people end up saying I should keep them</p>