<p>Okay, yes I am being dramatic. But I really do need someone to critique my Common App Essay.
It's very important to me so comment below ONLY if you will actually respond to my essay and/or give some meaningful feedback.
If you can read this essay right now I really urge you to comment and thank you so much in advance. </p>
<p>P.S. I will your essay too if you so wish</p>