<p>Pleaseeee :)</p>
<p>Your essay SUCKS!</p>
<p>LOL that’s not what i meant. I meant read it and then BASH it</p>
<p>Maybe you should ask, Idk, an ENGLISH teacher? -.- Or at least a parent.</p>
<p>* yalefanboy *-
I have read your essay.
It is solid. I liked the subtle connections between Chinatown and your intended major.
The ending was relatively weak compared to your introduction.</p>
<p>^This is a different essay lol I’ve written over 8 essays lol I am applying to 14+ schools lol Thanks for the review.</p>