Best admission essay?

<p>Try not to make the hospice one generic where you just made other people feel better by being an angel. The 3rd one, as others said, is definitely NOT what the adcoms are looking for, a self-diagnosed pity story. I like the marketing idea, but that may be its own essay in a supplement or description when you state your E.C.'s, but if you learned something a lot bigger than that, I’d use it.</p>