<p>Hey, who on here is willing to help me out with my essay? I'm so lost and don't know where to go with it. My first paragraph is long and I need to cut it down, but i don't know how without losing the point I'm trying to make. I really need help. Please!</p>
<p>I'll try and help. Send it over.</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>
<p>Bump!!!!! plz</p>