Best College Essay of Class of 2015

Colleges and Universities A-Z Harvard University
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<p>Can you PM it to me?</p>

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<p>yeah, send it here… where are you from btw?</p>

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<p>PM. I’m always interested in reading obnoxious people’s essays. It’s fun.</p>

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<p>I would read it. It sounds interesting. PM me.</p>

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<p>I am very interested. PM it over!</p>

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<p>Please PM it to me. I would thoroughly enjoy reading it.</p>

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<p>Definitely PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me please.</p>

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<p>If you got accepted with this essay, congrats to you man. BUT I don’t think you got accepted because of your essay… You got accepted because of your family story. This piece is way too wordy and filled with unnecessary sensory details that become kind of cheesy towards the end and overdramatic. Good writing is usually concise, and this essay could be cut down by at least 1000 words… (idk how long it is exactly) Harvard asked you for a 500 page essay and you gave them a book to read. Like Mark Twain said: “I would’ve written a shorter letter, but I didn’t have enough time.”</p>

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<p>Yeah, it was decent, but sort of stilted and overly polished IMO. Didn’t sound natural. Not by any means “Best College Essay of Class of 2015” (but of course we already knew that).</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it as well! PM me</p>

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<p>Not sure what the point of the title is or what you meant in your first post, but I’d still like to read your essay so feel free to PM over. </p>

<p>(my 300th post)</p>

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<p>Do they put out the 50 Successful Harvard Essays every year?</p>

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<p>hey i’d love to read your essay too. pm me.</p>