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<p>Just kidding, but I think it is pretty good. Anyone wanna read my Why Penn essay? </p>

<p>Non-08er's only please PM me.</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

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<p>anyone wanna read it?</p>

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<p>You eliminated me reading it with the "no 08ers" part, sorry.</p>

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<p>i can take a look. if you want, pm me please.</p>

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<p>yep, I can read it. I'm 09-er, so you can send it to me (I'm planning on applying to Penn next year :P)</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>pm it over ill read it</p>

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<p>I'm an 08-er ,but I'm not applying to UPenn or Penn State (I am silly and don't know which one you mean). If you don't get enough from others, I'll be glad to give you feedback.</p>

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<p>it also might be helpful to you to read an admitted students essay. might give you some ideas. and certainly it'll show you atleast 1 essay that admin officers liked, here's a link to it: <a href="https://www.largeenvelope.com/display_essay.php?mid=286%5B/url%5D"&gt;https://www.largeenvelope.com/display_essay.php?mid=286&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>and here are the stats on the Penn student who posted it:</p>

<p>Currently Enrolled: Penn Year: Sophomore
Sex: Female, Major: Bioengineering
HS GPA: 4.0, SAT: 2350 </p>

<p>FYI: my d found this site and used it.</p>

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<p>^ what was the prompt to that wonderfully written essay?</p>

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<p>don't know, I just found it on that site. I guess you'd have to research what the Penn prompt question was in 2005 or ask the Penn student who posted it. I found it on this page:
Large</a> Envelope - GET IN</p>

<p>screenname: Donna</p>

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<p>i'm not sure how that name popped up because that wasn't the link i just posted, but i checked it and it does go to the Penn page with the student Donna's essay</p>

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<p>Hey, PM me and ill try my best to critique you. i don't think im applying to Penn , btw.</p>

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<p>Thanks for all the offers everyone, but I can only send it to older members.</p>

<p>Anyone else wanna take a look?</p>

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<p>I just got a harsh critique saying it was boring.</p>

<p>That's okay thought, I wasn't going for some action packed short full of dazzling metaphors. I was simply saying "WHY" Penn is right for me.</p>

<p>Anyone else care to weigh in?</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>