Biographical Essay feedback needed

<p>I'm looking for someone to read my essay on the topic:
We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations and accomplished your academic successes. Please describe the factors and challenges that have most shaped your personal life and aspirations. How have these factors caused you to grow? (800 word limit) *
and give me adive please</p>

<p>Hey.. Evn m preparin essay on da same topic.. Wud luv to read it..</p>