Bizzare Essay What Do u Think?

<p>Post here, ill PM it to you.</p>

<p>I appreciate and and all feedback, and because it is 150 words too long, I'd really appreciate it if you could tell me which parts are unnecessary, etc...</p>

<p>i want to read it.</p>

<p>I’d like to read it please.</p>

<p>I’ll look at it, also</p>

<p>I’ll critique it for you, just PM me.</p>

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<p>I’d like to read it, I’ll PM you check your messages.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM it over to me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it… could you read mine as well?</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>You can PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you still want.</p>