Bleh, I've already submitted my essays but can anyone read them? [I also critique]

College Essays
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<p>Maybe it's because LoL's servers are lagging right now or maybe it's just because I need to find another reason to procrastinate my January Mocks revision (oh god, I'm the Hamlet of our generation), but lately I've been really insecure about my essays. The thing is, I would like an objective person to give their opinions on my essays and to see if it's 'good' or not. My friends, teachers and counsellors have all somehow coalesced into a suck-up factory and somehow I feel it's more reliable to find a stranger to read my essays. They won't judge me just because they don't like the shrillness of my voice.</p>

<p>Anyways, if anyone is (negligibly) willing to read my essays, please pm me.</p>

<p>I will also be willing to give feedback for anyone interested as well. I mean, one of my friends sends me 20 copies of his USC essay every day, each with OH SO BIG CHANGES (he accidentally a word. every. single. time.). I've read a lot of essays so I'll also be willing to critique -- don't cry though, I'm sarcastic and sweetly passive aggressive. :)</p>

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<p>Don’t torture yourself by looking for trouble. If your essays are already in, it will NOT make your wait any easier to have things pointed out that could have gone differently. By all means give feedback to others, but if you send out already submitted essays you are just poking at something you cannot change.</p>

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<p>Huh, I guess this is true, I’m probably hesitating over the ‘What Ifs’ of all of my essay, as the more I scrutinize them, the more glaringly obvious their flaws become. </p>

<p>I would really like to give feedback but I guess the problem is that as a ‘new user’ my reputation is probably not very good and people would be hesitant to hand over their essays to me - which I completely understand. </p>

<p>If anyone does want me to read their essays, go ahead and pm me. I’m behind a computer screen, I won’t bite.</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me</p>

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<p>Heyy I am new to this website and i was wondering if could PM my college essay to anybody who is willing read my essay and provide some feedback. How do you PM somebody?</p>