<p>So for my common app essay I'm writing about my world travels and their influence on me.
I've asked people to read it over and they all like it BUT i feel like it's bragging a bit.</p>
<p>I feel like it makes me sound like I'm bragging about all the places I've been, and I dunno if that's okay?</p>
<p>I would personally choose one place you’ve been. There’s no need to write about your privileged life.</p>
<p>You might want to add how these places you have visited affected you or what you have learned from them.
Just to word you essay to shoe that you aren’t bragging or taking your traveling for granted.</p>