**Decision: Accepted **
Intended Major: Linguistics
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1500 (770 R/730 M)
SAT II: 710 Spanish, 720 Math II
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.6
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): School does not rank or do percentiles. Estimated top 15%?
AP (place score in parenthesis): Spanish (4), APUSH (4)
Senior Year Course Load: AP World History, AP Computer Science, AP Calculus AB, Adv. English XII, Modern Chinese History, Bioethics
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):
Awarded the Drama Prize in 11th grade for performance as Jesus Christ (Godspell)
Awarded the Music Prize in 11th grade for leadership in A Capella group
Not really an award, but…I was part of an accelerated Spanish program that only takes 2 students every year. Essentially, I started freshman year in a 10th grade Spanish class, meaning I was a year ahead for the rest of high school. As a result, I sort of ran out of Spanish classes to take my Senior Year, which is why I don’t have a foreign language on my transcript this year.
Subjective:
Extracurriculars/Activities:
1.Leader of our school’s selective A Capella group, 9-12
2.Founder/Leader of Linguistics Club, 12
3.Leader of Creative Writing Club 11-12
4.Captain of Varsity Track and Field in senior year, member 9-12
-1st place in Triple Jump at both local and state relays 2 years in a row, our team won the 2017 PAISAA State
Championships.
5.Self-taught in Swahili for the past year, took a self-guided online French course from Middlebury College over this past summer
6.Internship as teaching assistant in ESL (English as a Second Language) night classes for immigrant workers in Philadelphia this past summer
7.Lead role in every theatre production since freshman year, for a total of 7 shows, counting senior year. 9-12
8.Senior Member of Performing Arts Council, 11-12
-Oversees miscellaneous performing arts related events throughout the year. As part of my duties, I help host bi-monthly
open-mic nights for students to perform for each other, and write/record/star in silly music videos to advertise said events, which are sent out to the entire school.
9.Main Anchor for Weekly Student Newscast, 12
-Totally student-run, films on weekends, writes scripts during the week. I’m a writer and one of the two main anchors. We give announcements, interview teachers and students in Student Life segments, cover sports news, etc.
10. Volunteer storybook character at local children’s museum, 9-12
-This is one of my personal favorites. I dress up as prince charming/peter pan/shiny knight/pirate and entertain children for like 5 hours at this annual event called the Storybook Ball. It’s not the most intense EC but man do I love making the kids smile.
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
For Personal Statement I chose the prompt about challenging an idea or belief. I talked about a time my best friend (1st generation African) and I had a falling out over my decision to learn Swahili. Long story short, by the end of it my views on racial/cultural identity, which were pretty toxic before, were radically changed for the better. (10/10)
My Brown supplements were pretty solid, I made a really dope analogy in my “Why Brown?” essay where I compared Brown to the English language, which tied into my Linguistics major and all. (9/10)
I really, REALLY think my essays are what made it, guys.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1:Spanish teacher who I’ve had 9th-11th, I came up with the idea for Linguistics club with her over the summer and created it in collaboration with her, so I think it was good. My only worry was I slacked off a little in AP Spanish Junior year, ended up getting a B (86.9%) – she likes me so I know she didn’t badmouth me, but she probably mentioned it. (9/10)
Teacher Rec #2: APUSH teacher in 11th grade, wonderful woman, we’ve had many laughs together and she likes watching me perform. I did really well in her class and never slipped up, so I have faith in this one too. (8/10)
Counselor Rec: I dunno, wasn’t too close with my counselor and I obviously waived so, this was probably pretty good (7/10)
Interview: My interview went REALLY well, the guy I talked to went to a high school right next to mine and he knew all about my school. We got along really well and had similar interests, and it was in a Starbucks so everything was pretty casual. (9/10)
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Linguistics
State (if domestic applicant): Pennsylvania
School Type: Private
Ethnicity: Black/African-American
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: Err, upper middle class? I dunno tbh.
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM, possibly athletics but I wasn’t recruited or anything.
Reflection
Strengths: EC’s, Teacher Recs, E S S A Y S
Weaknesses: GPA for sure. I thought I would be deferred because of this.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: I really worked those essays, and I honestly think I was just a good fit for Brown. I dunno, I need to come down from the excitement before I can really reflect.
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Nowhere, this was my first (and last) result!