Brown essay, please look over

<p>I'd like someone to look it over and tell me if the content/tone of the essay is okay. I really love Brown, and it's important to me!
Thanks!</p>

<p>I’d be happy to look at it. Do you wanna swap-check essays? I did choice B.</p>

<p>sure! i’ll pm you in a bit</p>

<p>k, I’ll PM you back</p>