Brown/Stanford Essay Critique

<p>I am in the final stages of editing my Common App essay answering prompt 3 or 5 (could be both, haven't decided which one to go with yet), and I'm looking for someone with experience (college+) to provide me with candid and constructive criticism. I am sending it to a few Ivy Leagues, and I am a pretty experienced writer, so I am open to anything that will allow me to improve. If you would be willing to read over it, please comment, and I will PM you my essay. Thanks!</p>

<p>PM me if you would … or email me at mpewangy(AT)yahoo(DOT)com</p>

<p>sure pm me</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>Sure thing. I can help you out</p>

<p>Pm me 10 char</p>

<p>I’ll read.</p>

<p>Pm me, I’d be happy to help.</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>Send me a PM and I’ll be glad to help you. I’m new to these forums, but I’ve been in college for two years.</p>