<p>Hey everyone I was wondering if anyone would read my first draft of one of my Brown writing supplement essays?</p>
<p>I had a horrible GPA in high school, went to community college and should be applying with a 3.7-3.75 GPA so I REALLY need to hit these essays out of the park. </p>
<p>The essay is:</p>
<p>"Please tell us more about your interest in transferring. Why does Brown appeal to you as a college option? Who or what has influenced your decision to apply? (250 word limit)"</p>
<p>So if anyone is strong at writing essays and can proofread and/or give pointers, suggestions, or corrections to mine I would appreciate it so much!</p>
<p>I don't want to post it here but I'll message it to you if you're down.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>