<p>Hey guys,
I'd really appreciate it if I could get advice and editting for my second prompt for UCs.. (its only 4 paragraphs).. it would be great if you guys could tell me what to improve, or if you see anything illogical.. thanks so much!
(post here if interested)</p>
<p>Hah this is Berkeley, home of the independent workers! If you think the students will take their time to help then you should reconsider applying to Berkeley! ...just kidding.</p>
<p>i'll read it if you want.</p>
<p>hmm.. castel- it wouldn't take them more than 5 mins to read it.. 4 paragraph essay.. thanks hr, can anyone else read it?</p>
<p>yea but hes trying to incite independence. but ill read it. dont know how much i can help though</p>
<p>il read it message me i will give honest feedback!:)</p>
<p>I’ll read it… the five minutes spent reading an essay is nothing compared to the hours spent reading 100 pages of anthro per week.</p>
<p>hmm… this was 2 years ago… haha. I’m a second year in cal now, but thanks for wanting to help! :)</p>
<p>pm it to me</p>
<p>Aren’t you already a Cal student?</p>
<p>@sn0angel07- Don’t you just love resurrected threads? :D</p>
<p>i’ll proof it. so you won’t get in hahaha</p>
<p>Ugh… this is annoying… You guys stop posting on this thread! haha… I’ve made my way in Cal already… now I’m more worried about med/grad school - so can we just let this thread die? lol =</p>
<p>lol! this is from 2007…that’s funny</p>
<p>and it’s even more funny that you’re still on this website after 2.5 years</p>
<p>lame</p>