Calling Adad,Andale,Northmom,Northstarmom,CollegeMom,Alexa ndre,all the hot CC members

College Essays
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<p>I went through some of your posts and saw that you are giving a lot of help to the students here. So I was wondering if you can help me too. To the other hoties who are on CC: I am sorry if I did not put your name in the thread, but I could not go and check everyone’s post right now but you are welcome to help me.</p>

<p>I kind of don’t have any friends who are English speakers so I really need your help. No one in y family speak English so they can’t really help.
They put me on academic probation today. I am a “smart” student, according to what my teachers said but I have some personal problems that just kept me from doing my work. I humbly admit that I can excell in some subjects and I demonstrated strong sign of creativity. I wrote an essay that I would love to use next year so I would love it if you can give me some feedback. I have been down all day because I know that my grades are can’t get me anywhere but if my essays can help and save me, I will do my best. </p>

<p>The essay is kind of long because I did not write it specifically for colleges but with your feedback, I will cut down anything that is unnecessary. I am sure that few people will be writing about the same thing as I. I might not send it to you immediately because I would love to do some editing and I am packing to go home right now. However, I will send it ASAP</p>

<p>I need:
- Do you think that I should send it (kind of controversial)
-Honest, sincere and brutal feedback
-Tell me if you learn something about me and if this something make me look as someone who can brin a different spice to the school.
- What I should cut in the essay
You will find some grammar mistake but excuse me because English is my third language.</p>

<p>Your comment will be appreciate even if you are not a parent.</p>

<p>Thanks to all of you and have a nice summer!</p>

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<p>Four teen v-you and z-Oh! and swears?</p>

<p>bump!</p>

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<p>I sent you a PM.</p>

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<p>well I’m no ivy leaguer (or anything close even) but I did get into some decent schools and like to edit. PM me if you wish.</p>

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<p>I got your PM Adad. Thanks</p>

<p>muzicgirl, I will PM it to you</p>

<p>I am not into ivy league too :P</p>

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<p>So no one wants to read my essay? Where are you guys? :S Just send me an email if you want to read it. Not a PM because I don’t know when I will check CC</p>

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<p>I’ll give you an honest opinion and answer your questions! =]</p>

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<p>I can give honest opinion/critique. Haha. I love reading essays.</p>

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<p>OK, so I’m not one of the “hot” ones. But you can PM me your essay if you like.</p>

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<p>I will PM all of you guys. I am sorry if when I say hot, you took it in the wrong way. By Hot I just meant the CC users who are more likely to help me with the essay because, I sometimes read on cc that we should be careful when sending our essays.</p>