Calling all critics: read my common app essay

College Essays
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<p>Post if you want to read. I prefer people 18+, though posting doesnt hurt and who knows, maybe you will find a little treat in your mail box. </p>

<p>Also its around 650 words if thats too long.....</p>

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<p>i can read it</p>

3

<p>Sure. =] Freshman.</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>i will as well</p>

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<p>i will read it.</p>

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<p>I can read it for you, I'm good at English.</p>

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<p>I would be more than happy to read it.</p>

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<p>I'm a parent, I'll take a look and try to give an objective critique.</p>

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<p>Ill edit it if u need pm or email <a href="mailto:rickster91@gmail.com">rickster91@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>This essay is actually being trashed. I didnt like it, it lacked flow, and was poorly written.</p>

<p>Sorry, thread closed.</p>