<p>hello : ) does anyone want to critique my "why tufts" .. plz</p>
<p>hey, i'd love to. just send me a private message with your writing =)</p>
<p>bump</p>
<p>i need two short answers to be critiqued .. anyone want to do it ? </p>
<p>: )</p>
<p>sure, I'll read them</p>
<p>I'd like to help out, just send a PM</p>