<p>Would any of you like to read my essay in response to Option 1 of the Princeton Supplement ("someone who has influenced you")??</p>
<p>I could use loads of constructive criticism!</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>Would any of you like to read my essay in response to Option 1 of the Princeton Supplement ("someone who has influenced you")??</p>
<p>I could use loads of constructive criticism!</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>yours must show who/what you are
yours must be well organised.
your inspiration must be meaningfull and have a greater impact on you.
yours must be coherent and inherent bothways;</p>
<p>I believe it succeeds on all accounts (to a certain degree!)</p>
<p>But it's a first draft, so I still need advice. Are you up for it?</p>
<p>buuuuuump?</p>
<p>sure.pm me</p>