caltech and commonapp critiques please

College Essays
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<p>Can I get some legit critique and advice on my CommonApp essay and my Caltech essay? Thanks, I'll PM it.</p>

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<p>I will, if you want</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and edit it FAST. PM if you would like.</p>

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<p>PM </p>

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