Can any parent help me this international student?

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<p>I come from Aisa, a country which is not rich and not developed. But I never stop my pursuit of knwoldge. I will graduate from the university next summer with a bachelor degree. Now I am applying for further education. I think to get a Master Science Degree will make me more competitive in my future life. My desire date of the entrance is the fall,2008. It took me nearly a month to write my Personal Statement. But I am afraid my Personal Statement will confuse Admissions Committee because I am not a native English speaker. So can anyone help me to point out the grammatical errors or something like that? Please?</p>

<p>If someone would like to help me, please tell me and then I will PM you.</p>

<p>Any help will be greatly appreciated. Thank you very much.</p>

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<p>You might want to PM the mods and ask them to re-title your thread to: Intl Students Needs Help Editing Essay.</p>

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<p>Hi Tom Shen,</p>

<p>Nearly 3 decades ago, I came to US as a foreign student for graduate studies</p>

<p>I would be happy to help you with any questions you have. If you would like me to review your personal statement/statement of purpose, please feel free to email me. I will PM you my email address.</p>

<p>However, do mention which area of studies you are interested in, and why.</p>

<p>Look out for my PM</p>