Can anybody skim this CommonApp essay for me?

<p>I was wondering if anybody could skim though an essay that i threw together. I dont know if i want to go with this topic or not, it may be too cliche, but I also feel like its important to me... just want to know how you guys feel. I dont need extensive critique, this is not the best writing ive ever done and its only a draft. a simple yay or nay would do.</p>

<p>Please let me know if youre interested and i'll email or PM it over to you. I want to decide if im keeping this topic in the next day or so.</p>