Can anyone? ANYONE? read my essay/

<p>Give me feedback, i wanta lot of constructiive critisism.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>I'll read. pm me :)</p>

<p>I'll take a look, just PM me.</p>

<p>anyone else? i really would like more feedback.</p>

<p>I'll read it. :)</p>

<p>sure:-) I will...</p>

<p>i'll read it :)</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>i'll do it ;)</p>