Can anyone check if my short essay is okay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Columbia University
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<p>I just want to know if it's "acceptable"</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>feel free to pm me</p>

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<p>ditto.............</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>i'll look at it.</p>

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<p>ill check it out..</p>

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<p>ill check it out</p>

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<p>ill check it out...</p>

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<p>i'll read it for u</p>

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<p>i'll read it.</p>