Can anyone critique my UC essays?

<p>Can anyone please give me some last minute feedbacks for my essays please?</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>i can but i can give u a response only tommorow cuz tonight i am busy.</p>

<p>I'll take a look</p>

<p>anyone else want to read it now and give me some feedbacks?</p>

<p>i guess i can while im waiting :)</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Please keep in my I have a 2.81 GPA and a 2100 SAT so my essays are written emphasizing how i slacked off, etc etc...</p>

<p>Can somebody read over my essay later today?</p>

<p>I'd appreciate it. Thank you.</p>

<p>I'll be happy to take a look.</p>

<p>Ok just send it</p>