Can Anyone Critique my UC Prompt #1?

College Essays
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<p>Just finished my UC Prompt #1... took me quite a bit of time and I would greatly appreciate if I could have input into my personal statement. Its around 450 words. PM me and I'll send it :]</p>

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<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments. </p>

<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not!</p>

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<p>bump10char</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look I you want</p>

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<p>I’d love to read :)</p>