<p>this is my first essay that i have written for colleges and i would appreciate any pointers that anyone would give me. i can email to you if you pm me your email address.</p>
<p>i'd love to read it :]</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if youre worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account </p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>