Can anyone evaluate my essay? Pretty please!!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>Hi, this is my first post!! I was wondering if anyone out there could read my essay and comment on it? It would mean so much to me... my dream school has always been Yale and my heart is set on attending such a fabulous institution. Please respond and I can PM you. Thanks a lot!</p>

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<p>yea sure send me a pm!</p>

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<p>sure. just PM</p>

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<p>^ I wouldn't PM an essay to a person with only 2 posts.</p>

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<p>PM me..no prob! :)</p>

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<p>PM me! I'll take a gander.</p>

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<p>i'd love to help you! PM me!</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read it if you PM it to me!</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read it! Just PM me</p>

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<p>PM it. I'm a college junior.</p>

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<p>Pm it to me...I am actuallly interested in becoming an editor if not a journalist so I'd love the practice and can usually give some great input...</p>

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<p>PM it to me</p>

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<p>Send it to me! I have been looking all over the internet for a good college essay to plagiarize and I think yours is it..... :)</p>

<p>// please don't send it</p>

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<p>Send it to me! My common app is set in stone.</p>

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<p>PM me it ^ same for me</p>

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<p>I could read it, and I believe im a good critic. I'm a grad student, so no issues there.</p>

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<p>Sure... I've been commenting on essays on this site for over two years...</p>

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<p>send it to me</p>

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<p>I would be happy to comment.</p>

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<p>PM it to me for some good criticism! :)</p>