Can anyone fix my grammar errors and sentence structures??

<p>I have my final draft of UC Essay #1 but many people have been telling me that I have awkward sentences and grammar errors. I fixed the ones I found but I still think there are more errors. Is anyone willing to fix those sentences?</p>

<p>Yes. I'll do that for you. Send it however it is usually sent I guess. I won't take it I promise. But I can fix grammar well.</p>

<p>I can take a look at it. I'm a good editor.</p>