Can anyone have a look at my Yale supplement essay?

<p>Hi, I'm an international student. I really want your opinions. O(∩_∩)O~</p>

<p>This isn’t like a peer review in a high school class – it’s much more important than that. Seasoned adults will be reading your essay looking for glimpses of your “character.” That’s an old fashioned word; it means the way you develop your inner qualities: intellectual passion, maturity, social conscience, concern for community, tolerance, inclusiveness and love of learning. You should share your essay with a teacher that knows you well – preferably, the teacher’s writing your recommendation letters, as Admissions Officers look for teachers to reinforce and confirm the “character” projected in a student’s essay. Ask your teachers: “Does this sound like me?” “Does this essay convey who I am?” If they answer yes, then you nailed it. </p>

<p>It’s also not wise to share your essays on CC because another applicant could inadvertently, or on purpose, steal your idea or concept and use it in their essay.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. just pm me.</p>

<p>Sorry to go off topic (I’m experiencing technical problems with starting a new thread)
Does Yale still consider you for SCEA if you write your SAT on 01 December?</p>

<p>I have contacted the admissions office to inform them of my difficult situation which resulted in an inability to write in November. And I am yet to get a reply.</p>

<p>This is very stressful as I fear that incomplete SCEA applications are disregarded, as opposed to being considered with the RD pool.
I believe that Yale is the best college for me, thus I applied SCEA, however If becoming a Yalie would mean being an RD applicant, then I’ll do it. I just need to know if there’s any hope for me with this predicament.</p>

<p>Please help, any advise will be much appreciated.</p>

<p>Thank you in advance</p>

<p>Sorry you are having problems, but please stop asking the same question on different threads.</p>

<p>^^ See: [SAT</a> Score Availability - SAT Score Delivery Calendar](<a href=“The SAT – SAT Suite | College Board”>Getting SAT Scores – SAT Suite of Assessments | College Board)</p>

<p>Yale will announce SCEA acceptances before the December SAT test results are available to colleges on December 20th. So, no Yale will NOT consider you for SCEA with a December SAT.</p>

<p>Also see: [Standardized</a> Testing for Freshman Applicants | Yale College Admissions](<a href=“http://admissions.yale.edu/standardized-testing]Standardized”>Standardized Testing Requirements & Policies | Yale College Undergraduate Admissions)</p>

<p>The last possible test dates are</p>

<h2>Single-Choice Early Action</h2>

<p>for SAT: November<br>
for ACT: October<br>
for TOEFL: November 5</p>

<h2>Regular Decision</h2>

<p>for SAT: January
for ACT: February
for TOEFL: January</p>

<p>BTW: Your SCEA application will not be discarded, it will be placed in the RD pool.</p>