can anyone help me on my Why Penn essay?! (please.:s)

<p>Currently studying abroad in Egypt.havent writtn an english paper in 5 months. DOes anyon want to help. Let me know and ill send it.</p>

<p>THANKS SOO MUCH :D:D:D</p>

<p>I can look at it. PM it. I am also applying RD though so if you have any concerns, just wanted to let you know. Promise I won't steal anything though.</p>

<p><a href="mailto:jwrappaport@gmail.com">jwrappaport@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>ill read it bro, i finished mine so i wont steal anythign either. i already have 7900/7900 characters so i actually dont have room to steal; :)</p>

<p>I'd like to read it and I'm applying to Upenn next year in case you wanted to know. Good luck ;)</p>

<p>pm me if you want another critique</p>