<p>So I have a rough draft done, but I still need to get that strong ending down. Would anybody be willing to give me suggestions on any part? Be as harsh as you like, I need the constructive criticism! I'm just not feeling confident about this essay yet... any takers?</p>
<p>I can take a look. I won’t be able to give line-by-line comments, but I can give you my general opinion of it. PM me</p>
<p>I’ll take a look. I’m applying this year too but I’ve got all my essay ideas done, and applied UC as well.</p>
<p>i was feeeling atrocious about my UC essays the day before they were due, then i got a good idea and rewrote it all. know exactly how you feel.</p>
<p>send it in :)</p>