Can anyone help me with reviewing my essay?

<p>I was wondering if someone could send someone my essay and have them look it over to see if they can find any mistakes (I'm good at editing other papers but not my own..) , see whether my essay topic is strong enough, and whatever else you think may bolster my essay. It would be best if the person were a college student or older. Thanks!</p>

<p>I’m not a college student (I’m in high school), but practically all of my teachers tell me I’m a great writer. I’ll read it if you want!</p>

<p>I can take a look at it. I’m already into a college, so no conflicts of interest there! :)</p>

<p>english whiz, 4.0 + 2400 here. pm it overr =D
might get to it late tho…</p>

<p>i’ll help if you want…</p>

<p>Yeah, I’ll send it to my stepbro, he can probably give sound advice. Pm it to me, I’ll email him.</p>