<p>Ahah actually I think it really sucks and it was the last essay I had to do of 10 so naturally I felt pretty drained from writing essays and don't feel like it really conveys a true sense of effort and meaning. So could you look over it for me and give me ANY suggestions, I'll love you forever :)</p>
<p>Sure, I'll give it a look. Hehe I definitely know that feeling of just not being able to write yet ANOTHER heartfelt essay. But I'm sure it's not that bad :)</p>
<p>Thanks so much sim1! I'll pm it to you. Honestly my essays were not this bad, believe me. I wrote this in 30 minutes in 1 go with the idea to just "get it over with". I let some English teachers and other adults read my Why Cornell essay and they really liked it, but this was written completely differently because Cornell asked about your academic interests and how Cornell can serve that so I had more specific questions to go on, while JHU just asked "Please explain in detail why you wish to transfer to Johns Hopkins University", so just a heads up, haha. Okay pm time, if anyone else wants to read it, just ask, I really appreciate any help!</p>
<p>sure -- i had the same problem 2 months ago. i ended up re-writing my essay 5 times! it's complete now; i can help.</p>
<p>Thanks blair and sim I just got your corrections cause of the time zones and I went to sleep yesterday, I'll send you back a response now =)</p>
<p>yeah sure for my harvard essays, i wrote 20 drafts for each... so dun feel drained!</p>
<p>oh my gosh, you have a LOT of brain power, I think I'd just accept failure and move on .. maybe. heh. anyway so I emailed everyone who gave me their email, if anyone wants to look over the JHU essay (and a Cornell one), just PM or post something here, all of these suggestions have been reaaaalllly helpful so far. I wish you guys could edit all of my essays! haha :)</p>
<p>ill do it - just PM me your essays</p>
<p>sure just pm me it</p>
<p>sure. Is this the 10 dollar one? I did one of thsoe last year. feel free to pm</p>
<p>pm me i will read it and comment back to you.</p>
<p>I'd love to read it, and comment, if you need any more opinions. pm me!</p>